बुधवार, 6 अगस्त 2008

i am doing !

i am doing
what doing
without knowing anything
i am doing something
there is a way
which have divided into four part
first, second and third
are mine , but fourth
i do not know about that
but i am trying
Becouse
something doing
yes, i am doing........

6 टिप्‍पणियां:

शोभा ने कहा…

nice lines. it is always better to do something or other. keep on doing something like this. :)

उमेश कुमार ने कहा…

Dear Anil What are you doing these day. tell me also. perhapes I also can help you. If you think so please inform me in time.

Nice poem
Thanking you.

उमेश कुमार ने कहा…

यह समय नही है सोने का,
एक भी क्षण अब खोने का।

राज भाटिय़ा ने कहा…

कर्म करते रहना चाहिये, बहुत अच्छा !

Udan Tashtari ने कहा…

लगे रहिये..शुभकामनाऐं.

Sarbjot Kaur ने कहा…

Hi Anil, It is really such a pleasant surprise to see ur english poetry. It itself speaks the story of ur efforts. I am very happy for your this spirit of "doing". It will definitely bring fruits of ur hard work.

Keep it up.